final idea

wow!

right.

opening of a serial killer, planning his next move, targeting young women, lots of props like maps and polariods, opening like the credits for se7en. lots of detail, of him preparing, montage style, with titles and stuff like him X ing on a map, and getting on a suit.

cut to black, with title of film on, hear sound of doorbell, cut to finger ringing on bell, and then have the door opening ots of him, as she opens the door we cut to ots of her (bringing in continuity editing), and he starts selling her stuff, like glass or something, and then she goes to close the door to shoo him away, cause he's creeping her out, and he puts his foot in the door and starts to muscle his way inside. sho t of floor with the sound of a thud and you then see her red wine fall on the floor where the camera is. This makes the audience want to know what happened but still guess she is dead.

James and Luke